Wednesday, September 23, 2015

Human nature essay


You live with it, surrounded by it, and there’s one name we call it by, evil. You're used to making mean comments rude hand gestures or people doing the same thing back to you. Which shows that humans are naturally evil.
How are humans evil? Humans are evil because their actions, language; personality. Everywhere you go you get discriminated. If you're not wearing the right shoes, clothes, even hairstyles you'll get stared at and even laughed at. You'll also get random attitudes, even if you were nice people don't care  they just give you attitudes, hands on their hips or rolling their eyes, they'll also use a hand gesture that is hurtful and mean. All these actions make people assume and have a very hateful opinion about you and what you may seem like.
How does society treat people? society treats people horribly today. Like i said in the paragraph above if you're not wearing the right clothing or shoes you will get made fun of no matter where you are. I was always told treat people how you wanted to be treated. All the time you'll often come across someone that is more unfortunate than you and can't afford what you can get and have. Due to the fact they can't afford barely anything they have to wear clothes that are too small for them and wear shoes that maybe belong to their parents or that they have for two years straight. And because of this people stare and whisper into another's ear and start laughing making it quite obvious that they were talking about you. I've always treated someone nice at first because i didn't know there back round. The only time i'm not nice is because you personally stated mean comments or you're just plain out rude to me and make fun of me.
What's the personality of an evil person? Many people have their personal account and perspectives of an evil person. I was at the Concord and Kannapolis game with my family and there was this married couple in front of us also just like anyone else really into the game. His wife however couldn't find it comfortable sitting on the bleachers because the man’s seat in front of them was broken. We told the man and the wife that she could move up here next to us if she wanted to get comfortable, She said thank you but continued to stay down there with her husband. The husband started yelling out of nowhere yelling “If you don't know how to sit down right then you don't need to be sitting here at all”. I thought to myself “If you wanted someone to move it's unnecessary to scream at them all you have to do is ask them nicely, and what do you expect at a traditional game everyone cater to you?”.
With the examples given and personal encounters would you consider yourself and your surroundings evil.

3 comments:

  1. I liked how you used specific examples from every day life but make sure to use correct punctuation and grammar. I also liked your introduction and ending paragraphs because you said "You live with it, surrounded by it" and I think it is cool how you started your essay that way.

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  2. I really like your introduction and how you started by saying that we find it normal to do evil things. It definitely captured my attention. I wish you would've made text references but you did a great job connecting the text to personal examples. Other than that, it was an amazing essay and I definitely enjoyed reading it!

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  3. Your introduction definitely grabbed the reader's attention. You also had some wonderful real life examples. However, remember that you were required to include text references in your essay as well. Thank you for sharing your personal experience, but remember to bring the text into your writing next time. Grade: 76%

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